my name is shrlockgnoms (gay i know, was attached to my battle-net account from when i played WoW)
add me foolz
ill add you tonight. i havent been playing as much lately but i have been getting way better.
my build order is like this:
10 drones
extractor
drone
spawning pool
drone
overlord
send 2 drones to vespene
drone x 3
queen
drones all the way up to 18
then 4 sunken colony (i think they are called spine crawler in SC2, the grround defense building)
and each time i build one i build a new drone to replace the old one
also simeltaneously you shouold be upgrading your hatchery to a lair
overlord
extractor
drones all the way up to 26
then the lair should be finished by now, then you need to build a spire and an infestation pit simeltaneously
then as soon as the infestation pit is done upgrade to Hive
then i usually start my 2nd base once my flyers start coming in,
usually take about 5 mutalisks and go fuck with their SCVs cause most people dont put air D in the back of their base
then you need to start thinking about 3rd base... and so on... the game gets way more interesting from there. i have found most people dont get to me in time by the time i finish my first spine crawlers.... if someone goes for 6 zergling rush off the bat i will usually lose but if you scout properly you can see it coming and get those in before you morph your hatchery into a lair and then they will just be fucked because they havent been spending time teching
also every single hatchery you build should be hotkeyed, and every one should have a queen constantly spawning new larva