I sincerely like what you are trying but there is some room for improvement.
First try to use an impersonal writing. don't use "I" or refer to yourself. Talk about the experience, the skating (try use the same style as in weartested reviews).
Try to put how many hours you skated the shoe, and an hour indicator with the pictures of the used shoes. Also, try to show the bottom of the shoes, it helps.
Also about the cushioning reviews you make. You don't necessarily have to feel the cushioning. I mean something can be cushioned and prevent you from heel bruises without feeling mushy. Also, something can feel mushy but that doesn't mean it will prevent your feet from being sore.
Try to keep a non-cringy style (try not to write like rippedlaces please), and keep doing reviews, the concise style is good.