Since this has basically turned into a feeler thread for aspiring entrepreneurs would anyone cop these.
Ouch, these kinda look like deparment store graphics but worse IMO.
What's with all the shit in the background, that just adds distraction and mess.
Is Dayton 5 the brand name? Why is the 5 obscured by the Dayton, why is the logo lockup so large and overlaying the cars. Not trying to shit on your stuff, its all subjective but I would rework all of them.