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henrydo.does.it

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1 Day Travel Guide to Oakland
« on: August 11, 2020, 04:06:20 PM »

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Re: 1 Day Travel Guide to Oakland
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2020, 03:36:01 PM »
Closed it as soon as I realized it was a vlog. Food looked good though.

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Re: 1 Day Travel Guide to Oakland
« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2020, 12:35:10 AM »
your energy was high throughout, which was cool, but the amount of spots you featured (2) felt a bit lacking. i would have dug it if you had hit a few more--the diy across the street from the courthouse, brownbanks, dragon park, etc. all those are within blocks of the courthouse, so it felt a little bit of a letdown to just go eat at the lake after skating. also, the part where the food spilled felt a bit forced--not sure what it really added to the whole vibe of the vlog. just some honest feedback. also, some of the editing could have felt a bit tighter, like when you're showing the shots of skating past the murals. felt like it dragged.

but, again, i appreciate your positivity and wish you the best. keep making stuff.