yo im an apprentice anyone wanna see my shit and pick it apart on a skateboard forum
Are you also a professional skateboarder? If so, yes.
If not, then yes.
But be warned, when you promote your art you are welcoming criticism as much as you are inviting praise. You are asking for judgement. Wanna do art for yourself to express yourself that’s only personal? Cool. Leave it hidden. Want to make a living at it? Then you gotta let the world see what you got. And he ain’t got it. And it can be that he ain’t got it, yet. But that remains to be seen. Also, if nobody tells him his lines suck then he has no motivation to get better.
If he were to read this and wants to prove me wrong, he can’t do it by arguing his experience or lack of, he has to practice and get better.