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His shading still needs improvement, but his line work is getting a little better.
he's already so much better! all ya'll need to get off his nuts
Lines are inconsistent, that shading in the wing where the color meets the black looks rough, will most likely chunk out. The head is fucked, the eye is dumb and the lines are worse there (that extension behind the eye and the line on top of the head near it are inconsistent), which is a shame because it's an important detail and heavily relies on those lines since there's no shading. I promise that eye will swell into the beak. The yellow is most likely doomed, but yellow is hard. The leg shading and lines look lazy, too.
This is not a good tattoo, I'm sorry. If he's apprenticing he should not be on skin yet.
I'm not trying to be mean to this dude, it's just that he's poaching in the woods of an industry that suffers because of people like him.