Starting a Vlog/Narration channel and need help.....

[SpankerChief]

So I have a shitload of stories of random pro's and dickheads that I have had the pleasure of meeting. I want to either put it on Youloser Or Patreon as either a narrative channel or a vlog?

 I put out a video already and I need feedback. please be nice as I really want this to work, but am willing to listen to constructive criticism.

[iKobrakai]

I'll be nice:

1 You need a script.

2 Edit but without those fucking jump cuts every other word.

3 You need to offer something, otherwise you'll become a e-beggar.

4 Practice to be in front of a camera.

5 Don't bitch about the algorithm of Youtube. It's their platform.

6 "Guys", "like and subscribe" have to go.

7 Ad revenue is pretty much gone, you need to sell other shit.

You probably have a lot of stories, write them down and cut a lot of shit, go for the good stuff.

[SpankerChief]

I'll be nice:

1 You need a script.

2 Edit but without those fucking jump cuts every other word.

3 You need to offer something, otherwise you'll become a e-beggar.

4 Practice to be in front of a camera.

5 Don't bitch about the algorithm of Youtube. It's their platform.

6 "Guys", "like and subscribe" have to go.

7 Ad revenue is pretty much gone, you need to sell other shit.

You probably have a lot of stories, write them down and cut a lot of shit, go for the good stuff.

Thank you I appreciate your help and insight.

[DanTheDoucher]

The story was good. Like Kobrakai said, get a script, or at least a rough outline of the story so you don't lose your place or forget what you were talking about.

Whatever that strap/belt thing is that's hanging in front of the camera needs to go.

Maybe move the camera up so it's more level with your face so you don't get a glare in your glasses.

And end the video with a "like and subscribe" type deal, and let people know when your next video is going to be.

Other than that, nice work and I'd watch more if you posted more.

[fulltechnicalskizzy]

Show me your feet

[SpankerChief]

The story was good. Like Kobrakai said, get a script, or at least a rough outline of the story so you don't lose your place or forget what you were talking about.

Whatever that strap/belt thing is that's hanging in front of the camera needs to go.

Maybe move the camera up so it's more level with your face so you don't get a glare in your glasses.

And end the video with a "like and subscribe" type deal, and let people know when your next video is going to be.

Other than that, nice work and I'd watch more if you posted more.

I hear ya and yeah I am trying to not stutter like an asshole.  Write some shit down and figure out how to keep the story interesting.

I am going to try to upload whenever no one is here. I will have a good one next week.

[SpankerChief]

Show me your feet

Only if you show me yours?

[DanTheDoucher]

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Show me your feet

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Only if you show me yours?

For your next vlog you should point the camera at your feet the entire time. That would draw an interesting audience.

[radcunt]

And look at Joe Rogan now!