Nice nose blunt nollie flip, best thing in there.
If your looking for real critism, meaning that clip wasn't just a home video for friends, then you need to work on your push (push less with better style and more power), skate faster and pop your tricks better. You have good tricks and I like the Rowely tribute gap but for anyone to actually get stoked on your skating you need to work on making those tricks enjoyable too watch.
I know women are capable of popping tricks proper but I've yet to see one do it.