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Poetry thread
« on: January 08, 2022, 05:30:54 PM »
I been organizing my old poems I thought a thread would be cool. Plz contribute if you like. I definitely would like to see what you got.

Who knows maybe in 10000 years when the next bunch of "advanced" Earthlings are excavating and cataloging the internet maybe the poems of slap will become some kind of historical book.

I wrote this in 2016 on LSD and dust. I imagined I was a slave to my tv. Was a matrix type of trip.

 

Forced Reality

Someone carry me away from here
I wish to be far far far away from here
Before I pass on
I brace for the drop

I launch after I drop

Reality I am Atlas

I can feel the spinal cuff

Crushing

When I practice free thought
Fiberoptic leads back up to the world I forgot

I'll try to forget it all I awaken

Replace my muddy bone marrow

Distraught

Unplug my sickened heart

Distraught

Replace my cancerous mind

Distraught

Reloaded

Suspended

Animation

Free thought

Suspended

Animation

Free thought

Distraught

Distract me

Distraught

The hand was descending

The weight is too much

The hand has retracted

The veil reinjected

In reality my name was atlas
The rest I forgot
My back hurts as I sit here
I have too many thoughts

Distraught
Distraught
Distraught

Distraught

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Re: Poetry thread
« Reply #1 on: January 20, 2022, 09:08:56 AM »
It seems I’ll survive every gutter on earth

You say it’s a gift I say well what is it worth

In my mind i know it could defly be worse

Muthas like me we gotta roll with the curse

I don’t gotta fight my mind

Because these ideas they aren’t ain’t mine

don’t gotta fight my mind
Don’t gotta fight my mind
Don’t gotta fight my mind

Because these ideas are defly not mind



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Re: Poetry thread
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2022, 09:56:43 AM »
I wrote some Haikus a while back when I was going through a bit of a tough time and couldn't sleep, some were skate related.

No idea if they are any good, but thinking them up really calmed me down.


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Skating at 40-

It's a lot like your 20s

But everything hurts

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Drove to the skatepark

Hyped for the session today

...Forgot my skateboard

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Skateboarding feels great

Freedom to express yourself

...Then you land primo

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Re: Poetry thread
« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2022, 01:03:19 PM »
I wrote some Haikus a while back when I was going through a bit of a tough time and couldn't sleep, some were skate related.

No idea if they are any good, but thinking them up really calmed me down.


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Skating at 40-

It's a lot like your 20s

But everything hurts

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Drove to the skatepark

Hyped for the session today

...Forgot my skateboard

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Skateboarding feels great

Freedom to express yourself

...Then you land primo

I like them

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Re: Poetry thread
« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2022, 10:49:38 PM »
Roses are red

Violets are blue

Try to look up if a thread exists before making a new one because now there's like 3 different poetry ones now

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Re: Poetry thread
« Reply #5 on: February 02, 2022, 07:20:54 PM »
Roses are red

Violets are blue

Try to look up if a thread exists before making a new one because now there's like 3 different poetry ones now

Lol